he was cold, but warm
he was everything i didn’t want
and i found myself searching
for the light in his grin
he was blunt, but true
nothing that he ever said was blue
and i found myself digging
in the coals of his soul
we had a whole train
of could-have-beens
i didn’t know then
how much he would mean
to me
i was strong but weak
i was everything we couldn’t see
but he found himself staring
through the cracks, right at me
i was smart, but dense
nothing that i ever feared made sense
but he found himself breaking
all my walls of pretense
we had a whole train
of could-have-beens
i didn’t know then
how much i could mean
to him
we moved on too fast
not that i ever thought it would last
but i found myself stumbling
in the coals of my soul
Obviously I’m not a professional songwriter, so this probably sucks, but putting those words on the page felt pretty good.
I started writing this for a book I’m working on (the main character, Loreen, was humming this song she’d written for a guy, Heath, with the intention of never ever letting him know because feelings need to be left caged in, right, guys? ahem).
But I couldn’t help getting personal through the lines cause I can relate with my character on this subject. So there you have it.
Feelings, or whatever they’re called.
In a song.
On the page.
For everybody to read.
Bye.
It was beautiful!
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Thank you so much!
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This song was GORGEOUS!! I like writing songs, but none of them are as good as this one. 🙂
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Aww, this means so much, thank you! ❤
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Hi can I please get the audio version of this please, thank you
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omg i thought about it but i’m still wayyyy too shy! working on that tho 🙂
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I. Am. Hyped.
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This song is so sad ! it rings deep inside me. i wish someone would sing it so that i could listen to it and sing along. ” we had a whole train of could-have-beens”. 💔❤️💔❤️💔❤️💔❤️
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Awww, sorry to make you sad! 💔❤️ But thank you so much for reading, my friend! I actually have the whole music in my head, haha, maybe one day I’ll work up the courage to sing it. Maybe not! 🤷🏽♀️
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